小学英语作文课件

The other day, Tom was riding along the streetwhen he saw a car run fast towards him. He turnedleft quickly but it was too late. The car hit him andhe fell off his bike. The driver of the car was sofrightened that he ran away as fast as he could. Hewas soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the g , g pspot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it andremembered the number of the car. She called thepoliceman and told him what had happened. Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrongdoing.Passage 3 The other day, Tom was riding along thestreet when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late. Thecar hit him and he fell off his bike. The driverof the car was so frightened that he ran awayas fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, f g ,leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, awoman happened to see it and remembered thenumber of the car. She called the policemanand told him what had happened. Finally, thedriver was caught and punished for his wrongdoing.Using connectives1. 并列 and, both…and2. 转折 but, however, though, while3. 因果 so therefore because so, therefore,4. 其他 when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, so…that… , finally, as a result, What was worseSummary : How to write a picture story? Go over the requirement （person, tense, style）Go over the pictures（who, what,where, when, why, howWrite a passage （usingconnectives and adding details andspecific information. 基本篇章结构① 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）② 事件的起因③ 事件的发展/过程④ 事件的结果 中考作文的评分标准四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0 2分三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理 语言不够流畅 字迹不够工整 5 6处次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5 6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3 5分二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3 4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得6 8分一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1 2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得9 10分homework假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日星期五的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。