《小学英语作文课件》

看图作文 200906010237 蒋天晓 Sample 1 根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。 1. Go over the requirement 1. topic : 2. Tense generally: 3. Person: A story （a traffic accident past tense Tom , he Tom /ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how Key words sentences ride a bike /run fast to When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. hit him /fall off his bike The car hit him. And he fell off his bike. be frightened /run away The driver was so frightened that he ran away. see the accident /remember the number /call the police /be caught A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught. 3. Writing a passage Passage 1 Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught. passage 2 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing. Passage 3 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing. Using connectives 并列 转折 3. 因果 4. 其他 and, both…and but, however, though, while so, therefore, because when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, so…that… , finally, as a result, What was worse Summary : How to write a picture story? Go over the requirement（person, tense, style） Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. 基本篇章结构 ① 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） ② 事件的起因 ③ 事件的发展/过程 ④ 事件的结果 ⑤ 扣题 中 考 作 文 的 评 分 标 准 四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得0 2分 三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5 6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3 5分 二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3 4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得6 8分 一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1 2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得9 10分 假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日星期五的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。 ? homework * *