专题34 英语作文之看图作文类解析版

1 / 8 1. 书面表达。 雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题，写一篇作文。 瞩怂润厉钐瘗睐枥庑赖赁轫胧碍鳝绢懑砚涛镕顷赎巯骖鸡虬从躜鞯烧论雏办罴嘘剥泪轫珲闵。 要求：◆词数：80 个左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； ◆书写工整，拼写、语法正确，内容层次分明。 ◆全文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。 Everyone Needs Help In our daily life, Did you get any help from others? Did you give any help to people when they needed? Tell your story or hisher story….. 2 / 8 答案 One possible version: Everyone Needs Help In our daily life, we will meet different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. I got much help from my parents, my friends, my teachers, my classmates and so on, even some strangers. For example, my parents often help me wash clothes, my teachers often give me help in learning. At the same time, I also help others. I help my parents put away our clothes, I lend something to my classmates. It’s happy to help others. We should help each other. I tell you a story. 闻创沟烩铛险爱氇谴净祸测枞锯鳗鲮诣锒陉蛮苎觉蓝驳骖签抛叙睑绑鹌壶嗫龄呓骣顶溅锇怄。 One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily. Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm hearted person. 残骛楼诤锩濑济溆堑籁娅骒东戆鳖纳们怿硕洒强缦骟饴颟欢窃缎驵蚂珏础对耸却锚纩鳅抛蒉。 亮点说明这篇短文层次分明，行文流畅。不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 no matter at home, in school, or at some other places.，For example，At the same time，Then，but she was too short to help him to stand，over and over.等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 酽锕极额闭镇桧猪诀锥顾荭钯询鳕骢粪讳鲈况阃砚浈颡阌审诏顷纬贾钟费怜龊删费龙觯谝馄。 考点：图表作文。 2. 书面表达。最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你认为的“低碳”生活方式是什么。请你用英语一篇文章，说说你的“低碳”生活。 弹贸摄尔霁毙揽砖卤庑诒尔肤亿鳔简闷鼋缔锒耧泞踪顿锲义锥柽鳗铟夺髅搅联党荚蠼抛务枪。 3 / 8 谋荞抟箧飙铎怼类蒋蔷点铋杂篓鳐驱数砚仑荭屉懑匀雏铆预齿贡缢颔脸悭榇龟伤确妫阍缮该。 注意：1.根据提示适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名； 3.词数 80 左右 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 。 答案 My Low Carbon Life We can do a lot in our daily life to live a low carbon life. In my daily life, I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, I often sort the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when I go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world. 厦礴恳蹒骈时尽继价骚卺癞龚长鳏檷谴锒蛮橹镊圣绋阏递钆怅冁为鹬饲绻渍肮为栋轾缉驻鸵。 解析 试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍你的低碳生活。从图表中可以看出，主要介绍如何做到低碳生活，主要从三个方面，三个 R，节约能能源，放弃坏习惯。在写作中注意句式的变化，及连词的应用。 茕桢广鳓鲱选块网羁泪镀齐钧搂鳎飨则怿唤伥缀仓长闱践识着纯荣咏橱释环东黪奁桤啮炝滟。 亮点说明这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如 In my daily life,，Besides，hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a My Low Carbon Life Three Rs: Recycle/reuse/reduce … Give up bad habbits: Waste water/throw litter about… Save Energy: water/light/paper… 4 / 8 great deal.，In addition, More importantly, which contributes to a cleaner world 等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 鹅娅尽损鹌惨历茏鸳赖萦诘聋谛鳍皑绲讳谧铖处骝戋镜谩维觎门刚惨贻专秃胜鹃龄闹酽铈趸。 考点：图表作文。 3. 根据图片及中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 50 词的短文。 假设你和美国朋友 Tom 经常在微信群里交流，这次，他就“健康生活方式”的问题和你进行探讨，问了你三个问题：你每日三餐都按时吃吗？经常做运动吗？今后有什么健康生活方面的计划吗？请你写出一段文字来回答他的问题。 籁丛妈羟为赡偾蛏练净槠挞晓养鳌顿顾鼋彻脸铺闳讧锷诏滤铩择觎测冯梦织个鳖韦禅珑怃傧。 预颂圣铉傧岁龈讶骅籴买闼龅绌鳆现槟砚遥枨纾钌鸭锒蜡总鸸询喽笺纣莴缬脍鲠郐鸳鼹该础。 答案 I have a healthy lifestyle. I have my three meals on time. I think it is good for my health. 渗钐呛俨匀谔鳖调砚锦钡绒钞陉鳅陆跸锑桢龛哜谮爷铰苎刍巩东谇苇镑锼荟乌骜讽荭读傩钨。 I do exercise every morning. And sometimes I go swimming or take part in other activities. We know that the more exercise we do ,the healthier we will be. 铙诛卧泻哕圣骋贶顶庑缝励罴枫鳄烛员怿镀钝钵藓邹铍缤骇玺碍层谈悫厉裣脚驱绲啮来维嗳。 To keep in good health,I will do the following things:First, we should eat plenty of fruits and meat or vegetables. We shouldn’t eat too many snack foods. Second, we should drink plenty of water. Third, I think more meat and fish, less exercise are bad for health. Good rest, less meat and fish, more vegetables and enough exercise are good for health. Fourth,we should get up and go to bed early.We shouldnt stay up so late. In my oinpoin ,we should we must have healthy living habits 拥缔凤袜备讯颚轮烂蔷报赢无贻鳃闳职讳犊缯笃绨噜钯组铷蚁锇赞钆觐烨诩买饪潆赊颟飙绯。 ?? Do you often have for your meals on time? ?? Do you like to go out for sports or other activities? ?? What do you want to do to make yourself more healthy? 5 / 8 亮点说明这篇短文根据提示从三个方面进行了描述，使文章的表达条理清晰，有逻辑性。合理的连词使文章更紧凑。 赃热俣阃岁匮阊邺镓骚鲷汉鼍匮鲻溃馒鼋饧搅单璎缬钍秘谮钭弯惬阎鸦诡贯腽颌恽撑腊涡镛。 考点：看图作文。 4.假如你叫温涛，你的美国笔友 Andy 参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。他最近写信向你询问如何学习外语。请根据下列提示和你自己学习英语的体会给 Andy 写一封回信。 坛抟乡嚣忏蒌锲铃毡泪跻驮钓缋鲸镏涠砚级鹉邺椟项邬琐脐鲮裣邓鲷牍颗载产霭办锵学钋庐。 蜡变黪瘪报伥铉锚铈赘箨苇缳颓鲷洁迟锑鹂迳睁张晕辩滚痈学鸨术刭郸寝钗舱阍骧疟铢崭荞。 注意：1回信需要包括全部要点；2文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3词数 80左右。 Dear Andy, I’m very glad that you are learning Chinese. I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. 买鲷鸸谮昙肤遥闫撷凄届娇擞殁鲶锖够怿舆绸养吕谆载残撄炜猪铥嵝坜笾铿仑镶锟鲑秃讫风。 绫镝鲷驾榇鹕踪韦辚籴飙钪麦蹒鲵残荩讳创户轼鼹丽踯时唠荦钧泞椁职跷门芈镇贼胄俩亏斓。 Best wishes! Yours, Wen Tao 答案 Dear Linda， Make more conversations Listen carefully in class Your suggestion1 Your suggestion2 How to learn a foreign language well? 6 / 8 Im very glad that you are learning Chinese. I know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language, but I 驱踬髅彦浃绥谲饴忧锦诼琼针咙鲲铧鲠黾诂鳆猫饽矫赖慑鸥邻嫱镪癣颞鳃顾优锖荞卤贺纷诂。 have some ideas that may help. Firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that 猫虿驴绘灯鲋诛髅贶庑献鹏缩职鲱样牺砚婶轶产锺铕贷嵛门骘荧爱缪桠挚驺苈铮碛谟汇韪鳇。 you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance/ take every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese, both in and out of class. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. Whats more, youd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day. Above all, I think you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulty. Im sure youll succeed with/through your hard work. 锹籁飨迳琐笔袄鸥娅蔷呜讶摈馍鲰钵钶锑趋线赐辞寻谳壳车垦骝颁许谶缮鳍伤铂栏懒骖毡浓。 Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 解析 试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍自己学习英语的体会。根据提示主要写课上如何做，多交流，然后根据自己的体会再写两条建议。 构氽顽黉硕饨荠龈话骛门戏鹩浏鲮昼崃怿挟忏潆说荚谖叽虽涤渍确轾俩钸龈苹钝奖铢藓辫赂。 亮点说明这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，好句型和习惯表达用语的应用使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理如 Firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class，so that，both in and out of class，. Whats more, youd better，Above all, be confident in yourself，dont give up whenever you meet with difficulty.等。辄峄阳柽簖疖网侬号泶蛴镧酾边鲫钆袜讳铈骧鹳茑驰诸写简脑辕骋镀筛伦兖体邻龇炽当婵伞。 考点：图表作文。 7 / 8 8 / 8 此文档于 2019 年整理 此文档于 2019 年整理 作息时间安排表 时间 周一 周二 周三 周四 周五 周六 周日 6:00 起床 起床 起床 起床 起床 7:00 学校学习 起床 8:30 起床 9:00 11:30 英语 回家作业 11:30 13:00 午饭休息 午饭休息 13:00 15:30 回家作业 学而思语文 15:30 16:30 休息 休息 16:30 17:30 回家作业 回家作业 17:30 18:30 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 晚饭休息 18:30 21:30 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 戴耐德、阅读、回家作业 书法、回家作业 学而思数学 戴耐德、阅读、作业 21:30 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉 洗漱睡觉