帮忙写一篇高二水平的英语作文要求：字数：130个字!不要太华丽的累赘连篇的从句什么的

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Dear Peter,1） How is everything going?2） Now,I feel like sharing my experience of watching ceremony of hoisting the national flag on October the 1th,2007.3） To my suprise,some 100 thousand of people gathered in the Tiananmen square in the rain just to watch ceremony of hoisting the national flag .They hoped to express their heartfelt admiration for motherland and expectation of its prosperity.It was reported that about one million people payed a visit to the capital of motherland during the October Day "Golden Week".4） As far as Im concerned,maybe you have learned something about October the 1th,2007 on which our motherland was founded for 58 years from my grief introduction.5） Best wishes !I look forward to learning about some interesting recent news.Please write to me soon!6） Sincerely yours,Weiming.前一篇字太少,又修改了一下!（数字表示分段）

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