假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处

Last Saturday I went to the library as usually．At about noon，I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help．I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything．Without any hesitation，I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat，but jumped into the water quickly．I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety．To his great relief，the kid was saved．I was proud∧what I had done．I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need．详 1．usually改为usual；考查固定搭配，as usual是固定短语，意为"照例，像往常一样"．2．while改为when；考查固定用法，be doing sth．when suddenly表示一件事正在进行中突然发生了另外一件事，这里的when相当于at that time，while没有这个用法，故把while改为when．3．hear改为heard；考查动词的时态，本文讲的是上周末的事情，所以用过去时态．4．happened改为happening；考查动词的时态，结合语境分析此处应该用happening，与was构成过去进行时．5．shocking改为shocked；考查分词形式作形容词，现在分词作形容词时修饰物，过去分词作形容词时修饰人，这里句子的主语是I，指人，所以用过去分词作形容词．6．peoples改为people；考查名词，people作为"民族"讲时是可数名词，作为"人，人们"讲时是集体名词，没有复数形式，句中指"很多人"，故用people．7．去掉had；考查动词的时态，这里陈述过去的一个事实，所以用一般过去时．8．but改为and；考查连词，分析句子结构，作者"脱掉上衣，跳进水里"，这应该是并列关系，故用and．9．his改为my；考查形容词性物主代词，结合语境分析，这里应是"使我欣慰的是…"，所以把his改为my．10．proud后面加of；考查介词，be proud of是固定短语，意为"以…为骄傲"．

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误 要求你在错误的地方增加 删除或修改某个单词．增加：在缺词处写一个漏字符号 在其下面写上该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线 在该词下面写上修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处 多者从第11处起不计分．Last Saturday I went to the library as usually．At about noon I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help．I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything．Without any hesitation I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat but jumped into the water quickly．I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety．To his great relief the kid was saved．I was proud what I had done．I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need．