以‘我们的爱好’为题的英语作文 100词左右.

幼苗

共回答了8个问题采纳率：75%

My HobbiesI have many hobbies,such as sports,singing,playing the violin and keeping a diary.In school,I often hear the P.E.teacher say,sports do good to ones health,and will make one live longer.So,I like sports very much.I go running at five oclock in the morning,and after classes in the afternoon.I play pingpong with my friends.These sports have kept me healthy.At home,I like to sing and play the violin.I hope I will be a singer and a violinist① when I grow up.In order to attain these goals②,I go to the teachers home for a lesson every Saturday,and practise singing and playing the violin every day.Busy as I am,I am quite happy.Of all my hobbies I like reading books best.In my bedroom there are nearly six hundred books.There are story books,textbooks,magazines,and others.When I grow up,I will serve the people with the knowledge I have learned from them.（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第5期）词语解释①violinist [vai+linist] n．小提琴手②attain[+tein] these goals达到这些目的写法指要1）本文的引言段只用一句就把全文的篇题表达出来了.但在篇题里出现的内容正文中未必出现,如“keeping a diary”,而在篇题里没有的正文里也可以写,如最后一段的“reading books”.这是举例说明文的一个特点.2）正文的三段是按照由次要向重要项目的顺序排列的,每一段均有主题句.第二段的主题句是第二句；第三段的主题句是第一句；第四段的主题句也是第一句.本文没有总结性的结尾段.把my改成our就行了 给分吧!你不是形台的吧!