助力高考！2009年英语高考书面表达解析！

【考点】R1：提纲类．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给房东Mrs．Wilson 写一留言条，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅地表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：和朋友一起外出购物．替房东到图书馆还书．Tracy来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消，2）此事已告知Susan3）尽快回电．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为准备外出及所办事宜．第二部分为Tracy来电话留言．

重点短语与句型：

go shopping 购物；set time 设置时间；call back 回电话；as soon as 一…就…

高分句型一：I have taken with me the two books that you asked me to return to the City Library. 此句用了that引导的定语从句．

高分句型二：Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. 此句用了saying现在分词作伴随状语．

【解答】

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books that you asked me to return to the City Library.（高分句型一）（准备外出及所办事宜）

At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.（高分句型二）She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Tracy（来电话留言内容）

Yours truly

Li Hua

【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．